If you want to sell your ideas, you need to know how to tell better stories.
And most founders tell their origin story backwards.
I was coaching the founder of a big LATAM neobank.
I asked him to tell me his company's origin story.
He spent 2 full minutes on how successful his dad was, how big the company got, and how respected he was.
At this point I was wondering, where is this going...
Then boom, 2 minutes into the story, he tells me how his dad lost it all overnight because of the corrupt banking system, and how he started his company because of that.
I stopped him. "Bro this is good but you already lost everyone in the first 30 seconds. Let's reorganize your story."
So I told him to do something, instead of building the story UP about how successful his father is, I want him to build the story DOWN about all that was lost.
The new version of the story looks like something like this:
"My father was very successful. At the peak of his career he had it all taken away. As a teenager, I had to live through seeing my family lose it all. I saw my dad struggle and my parents make hard decisions to get by. That's why I started the bank my father never had."
You see the difference?
The first story has a 2 minutes setup of success, followed by 30 seconds of failure.
While the second version has 2 minutes of pain and failure, followed by 30 seconds of success (where the company is now).
We simply restructured his story and moved the pain to the front and success to the end. And that alone had such a profound effect on how his story landed.
That's how you tell stories that keep people's attention.
When someone hears a story of pain and failure, it makes them pay attention because the brain hates open loops and needs closure.
So people will stick with you till the end to head what happened, and through failure, they will see themselves in your story.
This is how you sell through stories.